19 January 2009


the words dash
across the page
seemingly without me

fears all flee
contentment sets in,
the story begins

words flow through
fingers now ache
from thing unspoken

the sky darkens,
the rain starts,
the kettle whistles

story starts forming
characters become real
room starts spinning

Written spur-of-the-moment when I was bored in the computer lab. What do you Screamers think?


  1. it's good, i read it in quick bursts with each stanza. i'd say get rid of the last stanza tho, if u want, 'the room starts spinning' would be a good ending.

  2. Wow. Really good. I am so glad that you are my friend because I can just ask you for ideas!